The use of pictures is good, but I think you could make them take up the whole page and have the quote overlap them. I also think that your quote could be bold and/or bigger so that you can see it better.
Your introduction is informative and gives enough insight into the article without simply giving a commentary of it.
As for your jouralism, the language used makes it sound like a real artist. However, I think the first two questions should be the other way around as this would make more sense, and also an artist wouldn't necessarily take 5 years to write and produce a new album; I think that in 5 years an artist may be working on their third album.
I like the quote at the bottom but could be bigger and bolder to make it stand out.
ReplyDeleteThe use of pictures is good, but I think you could make them take up the whole page and have the quote overlap them. I also think that your quote could be bold and/or bigger so that you can see it better.
ReplyDeleteYour introduction is informative and gives enough insight into the article without simply giving a commentary of it.
As for your jouralism, the language used makes it sound like a real artist. However, I think the first two questions should be the other way around as this would make more sense, and also an artist wouldn't necessarily take 5 years to write and produce a new album; I think that in 5 years an artist may be working on their third album.